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do you like my poem something i wrote today.?

i dream a place souls gather in peace
an ancient forrest misty lake
golden meadows rolling hills
measureless in size
flowers bloom scent in the breeze
birds sing butterfly's flutter
in the sky angels fly
this tranquil place has no pace
a paradise that knows no pain
i glance this place from afar
a visitor no entry gained
just a feast upon the eye
come my time it is my wish
my soul will enter
take my place beside the lake
paradise eternal

I think you used too many cliches like a butterfly fluttering and birds singing. Why not say something like "melodies of the birds which we try so hard to understand" or something alloong those lines. By the way a cliche means using the standard phrases used by most people to describe something. Try describing in a more mysterious way or taking any other approach.
Other than that it's beautiful and I also noticed some assonance

New Moon Book Recap: Chapter 10 "The Meadow"

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Rare c1876 86 French HAVILAND MEADOW VISITOR smooth blank COMPORT VARIANT    US $185.77

Limoges Tureen Haviland Co Meadow Visitors 1876    US $172.50

HAVILAND LIMOGES RARE MEADOW VISITOR SUGAR CONTAINER OSIER BLANK W BUTTERFLY    US $109.00

130 YEAR OLD HAVILAND LIMOGES MEADOW VISITOR LUNCHEON PLATE WITH BUTTERFLIES    US $85.00

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